journal # 3 Spread 3 revisited

Between posting this page yesterday and today, something happened.  I set it on fire.  Actually I burned away part of it because I wanted to burn the next page, which I will show later... but I thought since spread 3 is the back side of spread 4 I would show what I did here.....

This was before....

and after.....

definitely a positive move, and later I will show what the burning did to the next spread...